Those Poor Poor Birds

This is what we are learning in our class, we got this we also had a letter and it said that they were cleaning their house because their grandmother passed away and then they found a box that had a brooch

Did the film communicate the script?

I think we did communicate the script because we could understand it.

Did it communicate the rising emotion being portrayed?
I think we had a bit of emotion but we should do a bit more.

What could you shoot differently?

If I could shoot anything I would make sure we all know our

lines and what we have to say.

What would make your film more understandable?
To say more things about the brooch and the Duke of York.

What would give your film more emotional impact?
Add some dramatic music.